Her Immortality Analysis

UPON a noon I pilgrimed through

A pasture, mile by mile,

Unto the place where I last saw

My dead Love's living smile.



And sorrowing I lay me down

Upon the heated sod:

It seemed as if my body pressed

The very ground she trod.



I lay, and thought; and in a trance

She came and stood me by--

The same, even to the marvellous ray

That used to light her eye.



"You draw me, and I come to you,

My faithful one," she said,

In voice that had the moving tone

It bore in maidenhead.



She said: "'Tis seven years since I died:

Few now remember me;

My husband clasps another bride;

My children mothers she.



My brethren, sisters, and my friends

Care not to meet my sprite:

Who prized me most I did not know

Till I passed down from sight."



I said: "My days are lonely here;

I need thy smile alway:

I'll use this night my ball or blade,

And join thee ere the day."



A tremor stirred her tender lips,

Which parted to dissuade:

"That cannot be, O friend," she cried;

"Think, I am but a Shade!



"A Shade but in its mindful ones

Has immortality;

By living, me you keep alive,

By dying you slay me.



"In you resides my single power

Of sweet continuance here;

On your fidelity I count

Through many a coming year."



--I started through me at her plight,

So suddenly confessed:

Dismissing late distaste for life,

I craved its bleak unrest.



"I will not die, my One of all!--

To lengthen out thy days

I'll guard me from minutest harms

That may invest my ways!"



She smiled and went. Since then she comes

Oft when her birth-moon climbs,

Or at the seasons' ingresses

Or anniversary times;



But grows my grief. When I surcease,

Through whom alone lives she,

Ceases my Love, her words, her ways,

Never again to be!

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