http://www.eliteskills.com/u/ACircuitShock The writings and poetry of ACircuitShock. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 09:38:33 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 09:38:33 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/12499 Hmmm... I don't know if I'm too happy about this one, I think it could use some work. I don't know though... tell me what you think! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/8956 Hmmm... I don't know, just wrote this now. Tell me what you think. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/9706 People keep saying I use too many commas so I just stopped using them for this one. Happy? Anyway, the meaning behind this one is pretty self explanitory. I know some people will say that I used "I" too much but I'm hesitant to change it. Let me know what you think! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/21810 Ahhh! title wouldn't fit! Well, a description you ask? Hmmm... this one, once again, is pretty self -explanatory. Tell me what you think! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/8823 Hmmm... don't really know if I can desbribe this clearly. I guess it's just an observation on the human condition. It seems like I'm talking to someone doesn't it? All my poems seem conversational, is that a bad thing? Anyway, this is my first submission to this website so tell me what you think! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/8825 Stupid title didn't fit but I wrote it with the poem anyway. You ever notice those people who rebel for the sake of rebelling? I had a friend who was like that and this is simply me expressing what I think about that. I mean, I wear black to and like all that music but I don't pretend to be sad, you know what i mean? http://www.eliteskills.com/z/8976 I don't know what to say about this, I don't even know what this is supposed to be about. Do you ever just write and not really know what is coming out? This is one of those. Oh well, tell me what you think! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/9114 Yeah, another annoyingly long one from that Circuit guy. Oh well. Have you ever heard of Atlas? He was the Greek (or Roman, can't remember) god who held up the earth. I like the idea of someone trying to help someone like that, someone so strong. I hope you like it! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/9105 Stupis title didn't fit once again! Oh well, I put it in the poem anyway. The idea behind this one is realizing you don't love some one anymore and that you really hate that fact. I think it needs more so tell me what it needs, please?