http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Adaria The writings and poetry of Adaria. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 19:43:38 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 19:43:38 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/65868 I take a lot from experiences, and this is one of the tiny things I've noticed about things. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/65867 K, so added a couple of things within this one. A bit more elaboration, as suggested. Thanks for the comments so far, much appreciated. And also, thanks for any future comments... also very appreciated. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/65713 This came out of no where. I was at first messing around with my boyfriend, but then it all came spilling out of me. I like to be contradictory, my contradictions are purposeful. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/65715 I picked a flower, and as it was dying I noticed this. And I related. And as to the comment previously, suggesting to use a metaphore, The whole poem is a metaphore which I hoped to get across by the last line. It's true. So... if there's any suggestions having to do with that... it'll be greatly appreciated. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/65994 I wrote this a long time ago. Sometimes I see things that just touch me and I have to write about them. So there you go. It's not much, I actually don't think too much of it except that I hope I get across the point I'm trying to make. Which is "Poor that true beauty is rarely seen"... Comment away, please... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/66429 Changed the ending, but still not sure about it. Can't say if it's better or worse... Oh, by the way, this is for my friend Paul, who was nice enough to let me use one of his memories. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/66599 Venting, I guess you could say. A protest to a long-standing lifestyle that I couldn't pretend to have anymore. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/66761 little bit of me. I know it's feeding the reader... but this is what I felt like I needed to say at the time. I basically just wanted to post this so that anyone who cared to know a little more about me could. This was written a couple of months ago, and I don't necessarily feel this way anymore, but there's still hints of this in my head... and, just to clarify, when I say "I long for a death" it doesn't necessarily mean I want to die or I want someone else to die. I see changes in my past, and when one part of my life ends and another begins, I call it "a death". so... don't be too freaked, or anything... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/74497 A feeling... in random intervals that I have. Just looking for... nothing, actually. Sharing I suppose. And it's also pretty much the only thing I've written in a time... so here ya go.