Elite Skills Writing Club: Cloacina http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Cloacina The writings and poetry of Cloacina. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 22:52:16 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 22:52:16 -0600 Elite Generator Dreams (An exercise in writing a scene- pointless) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/162642 IMPORTANT: This isn't really a story exactly. It's crap and has no real point. It was just an exercise I did detailing some pieces of conversations I had at a friend's house. It was just to get the feel of writing a scene. DISCLAIMER: Cusses Straight Lines http://www.eliteskills.com/z/162638 Eh, it needs work, but here it is for the moment. I am never quite sure- well, usually not quite sure- if I have a poem or prose. My Kingdom For A King http://www.eliteskills.com/z/176983 Believe it or not, as all over the place, stream of consciousness rambling as this is, I cut out parts because they were going in yet more directions. I know this needs trimmed, as it seems to be wanting to go into multiple places, and thus the flow is.....inadequate. A Queer, Disturbing Tree http://www.eliteskills.com/z/162643 A crappy thing I wrote awhile back about past lives, past relationships, truth, and self. Solid Brown http://www.eliteskills.com/z/164093 An exercise for a writing workshop. I have to do a list thing (needs to be short, not to lengthy on each "verse". Really might have went overboard with doing as much as I did. There's more to the exercise than that, but that's where I might have messed up. Mounted by Eiron http://www.eliteskills.com/z/161441 I don't know what this is- prose, a poem, a prose poem, random thoughts? Anyway, I know it isn't very good, but that is the point in critiques. I hope someone will be able to offer me some helpful advice on how to make this sound better. Also, as for line breaks, how are these? Birthing and Backsliding- A Boy's Metamorphos http://www.eliteskills.com/z/164195 My birth from my mother's eyes. I was told to do it from her pov, but honestly, some phrases are more me than her. Working on it. Blush http://www.eliteskills.com/z/162639 Pandora's Ouroboros http://www.eliteskills.com/z/164058 I definietly need to tighten this up and some places....well, some areas just strike me as BLAH. Like, it says what I want to say, but not in the way I want to say it. Need advice badly.