http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Ethan Brody The writings and poetry of Ethan Brody. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 20:05:58 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 20:05:58 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/88939 Until recently I wasn’t sure about the title … the way I see it this is a consequence of the whole thing. All kind of comments are greatly appreciated. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/91853 I'd appreciate if you commented on this. If you have any suggestion up your sleeve, please be my guest!! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154529 I wrote this a few days ago. Any kind of comments is welcomed. If you tell me what you think about it or give me some insides I will read and comment on your writes. Even if you hate this please let me know, it'd mean a lot to me. Thanks a lot. Ethan http://www.eliteskills.com/z/149533 I wrote this only yesterday but the true is that this is an idea that had been at the back of my mind for quite a while. I hope you can comment on it. I'm very interested in knowing if it means something to you or if I’m being understood. Whatever you want to say would be welcomed. I'll be forever thankful if you help me up with this one. If you do comment I promise I'll comment on your writes. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/143404 I have just finished this …. I figure that I need to iron it out in many ways … I know about the line breaks issue … I’d like, if possible, some assistance on that account. Also, I’m positively aware of the strangeness of the stanza 4 but, believe me that was intentional! Anyhow, I’d like to get some comments about everything … I mean … how it makes you feel … if I am being too weird … if you know what I’m trying to get across … general ideas … criticism …. Even if you hate it please don’t hesitate in telling me …. I’d be … I’m just interested in the way I’m affecting people …. Maybe I’m not touching anybody... And this is a load of crap... who knows …. If you comment I promise I’ll check your stuff and comment on them http://www.eliteskills.com/z/125554 I have started to write again. There have been some incidents that have triggered some kind of inspiration, to put it that way. This current write seems to be quite simple but appearances can be deceptive. I'm not sure whether it came out well or not …. I would really love to get some comments on everything really …. I mean any kinds of feedback would do. I'm interested in knowing if you got what I’m trying to get across and if you liked it.... as I pointed out earlier you can say whatever you fancy. Bash it if you are in the mood to do so …. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/145679 This is a re- write. I wrote the original version last year and I made the proper changes a couple of months ago but just now I concluded and post the purported final version of one of the most salient poems of my alleged writing career. Needless to say, I no longer feel that way. Hope you can have a look at it and tell me what you think. I'd very much appreciate your doing so. Please comment on what- so -ever issue you find relevant... If you so do I promise I'd take a look at your stuff and comment on them. Kind regards, Ethan http://www.eliteskills.com/z/81855 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/98367 Originally this was meant to be a much more elaborate and deeper write but somehow I got stuck. The result wasn't the best..... I wrote it a couple of months ago and I've been trying to fix it since then …….. I'd appreciate all kind of feedback and criticism ... I really need it.