http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Finnigan The writings and poetry of Finnigan. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:43:18 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:43:18 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/67106 I'm winging it, don't pay attention on how bad I do, just relate in real life how awful this and you can be. :) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/97492 Another one of my poems, this time it's serious. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/106609 Comments por favor. Thanks to: sadtrapofgravit for spotting a grammatical error. EDIT: Starts at 1. now. I guess I was being odd and decided to start with zero. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/106721 V1.0:Tell me what you think, I came up with the idea because of this living dead girl said she liked being nakey and stuff. Curled up in a ball, sitting beside the window sill, watching the rain fall, and reminding himself how strained he felt with her fibs. It's always the first cut that's the deepest, blood spilt on the ground is bound to become war between. These scars she left him on his body are just tragic to look, deception and lies are like the scars and scratches she left him. They are ugly, and unbearing to look at. Now that time has healed, the scars and scratches and bruises and bumps are gone, Without her, he is naked. V1.2: This one is better and is messed around by Janneke. Thanks for the support. I found that her style was quite intriging. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/115876 I think that you will find out that I have referred to things. This took me about a hour to think about and get down. EDIT: I removed a bunch of the commas. EDIT: Fixed spelling mistakes http://www.eliteskills.com/z/116662 Okay, you can see this is a special day since it's Saturday. I made my form a bit anti-poetic. It's a bit like Sandra Cisneros, The House on Mango Street. I guess this is like showing me a sign. Please, I'd like you to to welcome my new type of work. It's something new I'm trying. If it works out great, I want to be like Sandra Cisneros and write a great book about life. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/125783 Hah, I don't think I done a good job on this one. Tell me if like it. I think that I put a good twist on this one, but it needs improvement. -Thanks to: GoKart Mozart for finding a grammar error. manwithnoname for finding a spelling error. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/175902 This was a story that I had to write for physics this summer. I had to use unusual measuring units while still maintaining my creativeness. I didn't really enjoy writing this and I couldn't get into my real writing mood. This also happens to be my first zombie story too. Feel free to leave suggestions on what I should have added unit-wise. Feel free to destroy it. UPDATE: I didn't have to write 3-4 pages about stupid measurements; I had to write 2-3 paragraphs! Ugh.