http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Flynn The writings and poetry of Flynn. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 11:10:10 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 11:10:10 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154085 This is what you get, you know? So when will it unravel? It bites with teeth and fluttering velvet lips. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/153632 There is a lonely man, and old man, and Les Mis - who while in this part is unimportant - becomes quite important in the following sections. Any criticisms at all would be appreciated. Under stand though that this is going somewhere. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/156920 Random thoughts about my situation. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/156334 Ever feel like you're just making him or her up? Help me out with the ending... the whole concept is that there is one pair of footsteps for two people, because only one was actually walking down the shore... It needs to be 7 syllables. :s I did vary a bit, but I tried to stick to 6-8 syllables per line. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154587 Ever hear a girl sing, and instantly you are in love? Like she is singing for you, though you know she is not? Yet another part of the love-game I write. Please, any commentary you give would be vastly appreciated, and taken into account. -LJS http://www.eliteskills.com/z/155282 Wrote this in my journal, sorta. Like most of my writings I basically took the theme of my emotions and put into verse and song. It's my therapy, to belt it out like this. This is based upon my New Years surprise... same girl as all the other songs, heh. This is moreover about Hope and how a girl can inspire a guy to be his better self. This more about love than it is a New Year's resolution. It's about the kiss, which is the resolution, the revelation that I am worth fighting for. We all are. Every damn one of you reading this right now, are worth every cent of trouble. Just a matter of finding that someone to make you realize it, you know? Enough about this, read the thing. (Looking for critiques on the rhyming repetition and the idea in general. This is supposed to have a lot of upbeat tempos, and some parts are more rapped and screamed out than sung.) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/155285 ... My darker side, heh. This is the bit of me I keep to myself. Sometimes though, it shows, and it scares me. Enjoy my angst! And the... swearing. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154767 Bit dirty but who cares? It's still me. And I usually write about things that have happened in my life. This has not happened :D So don't go making assumptions those of you who know me personally ;) It took maybe ten minutes to write, so it's a preliminary (like all my submissions) So, please, nitpick and such. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/156058 Just a thing I wrote on a whim of fitful depression, par usual.