Elite Skills Writing Club: HaldirLives http://www.eliteskills.com/u/HaldirLives The writings and poetry of HaldirLives. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 10:28:28 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 10:28:28 -0600 Elite Generator Justice, Pt. 1 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/21914 This is a story I've been writing over and over for the past year or so. Please give good, quality comments, not just compliments. Also, please tell me where you began to feel an emotional bond to the main character and what questions popped into your head while you were reading it. Thanx and Enjoy!! Soleil http://www.eliteskills.com/z/134742 Inspired by MCR songs, particulary The Black Parade cd. I think of it as a song in my head, but it probably works better as a poem since there's no chorus. Just tell me what you thought of it, how you interpret it, and other such fun things. Untitled http://www.eliteskills.com/z/70615 This is a haiku I wrote and read at camp. It was inspired by Evanescence's song Paper Flowers. Just tell me what you get out of it. *Note*: Haikus don't have to be 5-7-5. More details below. To Whom It May Concern http://www.eliteskills.com/z/16146 The story of a princess driven mad by love. This is actually based upon a story I came up with for a role-play character of mine, I just changed the names and places. So please excuse any historical/cultural incongruity. It is also written in the form of a suicide note, so it may seem a bit hasty. Don't You See http://www.eliteskills.com/z/16182 This poem was originally written as a contest submission on another site, but I had to pay to enter it. So here it is for you. The Fall http://www.eliteskills.com/z/21969 This is a ballad I wrote in about half an hour. It's pretty self explanatory. It's based on a story that has many more details and subplots than are presented here, but it's got the basic gist. I tried to make in a traditional, Beowulf-like style, but I'm not sure how successful I was. Gray Christmas http://www.eliteskills.com/z/39453 This is just something random that began as a random description. I think it's interesting how the writing develops along with the character. The Speaker on the Wall http://www.eliteskills.com/z/87851 Many teachers at my school have torn the speakers from their walls and/or thrown things at them because announcements interrupt class too often. This is for those teachers. Should You Ask http://www.eliteskills.com/z/126620 My first poem in a long while. Just tell me what you think about style and rhythm.