http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Oli The writings and poetry of Oli. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 18:02:54 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 18:02:54 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/57567 This is a thing I wrote when I was watching a friend play hacky sac. He makes me smile when he's around. He is one of my insperations. I let one of my friends at school read it and she said it wasn't that good. Too simple. Let me know what you think. Critisism is welcome. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/64488 I don't know about this one. Tell me what you make of it. Be totally honest. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/62066 I need help with this. This came to me a little while ago but I didn't get it down fast enough so I was unable to get the words out just right. I was planning on going in a certain direction but then it changed and now it is a story of irony, how the girl believes the wind will keep her words safe when the wind was the one that stole her privacy. I think it might be lacking something or isn't quite the thing I wanted to depict. Please tell me what you thought of it and what was going through your mind as you read it. Be totally honest and tell me what you truly thought. and feel free to give suggestions on how to improve. Thanks in advance. :) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/67057 This is another poem in the beautiful series. You don't have to read the other poems to understand it, it speaks for itself. I'm not sure how many poems there will be. I guess I'll know when I'm done. Please tell me what you think. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/46399 This piece just came out of my head. It needs some work I think. The ending doesn't seem to fit. Please tell me what you think and how to improve it. Thank you. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/51342 I'm just not liking who I am right now. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/42111 This was a poem I entered in poetry contest. It was poorly written so I didn't get a prize but it was how I felt at the time I wrote it. feel free to tell me how to improve it. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/42330 This is something I wrote this morning after a good jog last night. As you read this imagin yourself doing the things you are reading. Please tell me how it made you feel, if it made you feel anything. (this is improved with the addvice given to me by the readers. Thanks to all who contributed.) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/42949 This is a small dipiction of what it would be like to be in my head. It's a little wierd but I like it. I hope you do to. Let me know what you think.