Elite Skills Writing Club: Rask http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Rask The writings and poetry of Rask. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 10:47:11 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 10:47:11 -0600 Elite Generator Hanging on to Your Every [False] Word http://www.eliteskills.com/z/101566 The title sort of reminds me of an atreyu song name. Again, I had to think harder about the title than about the poem itself and even then, it's still not so great. Mediocre, if that. The poem itself, again, is about supressed feelings in a way. Personal experiences, to an extent, or maybe more over expresses inward fears. Serenity in Death http://www.eliteskills.com/z/101744 I got the whole idea for the song from the second stanza... I'm also working on a piece of prose to go along with this; the same idea, in a sense. Well, not entirely, but when this song was first being written, I gave up and worked on the prose... Although, the song has a whole different meaning now though. Inside Out http://www.eliteskills.com/z/101562 A poem I had a lot of trouble naming, along with all my other new ones. Not much to say, except expresses relics of supressed feelings. Passion Lost Persistence http://www.eliteskills.com/z/118323 Another short one... this one has a little more flow in terms of meaning to it. Enjoy. Animus Rapture http://www.eliteskills.com/z/105917 Started a while back... worked on it off and on for a while. The meaning is obvious [hopefully], where as this was more of a poem to describe inner self reflective emotions. Enjoy. Untitled http://www.eliteskills.com/z/101742 Written from pure emotion, one of my only new poems I finished-- well not quite, it still needs a title. I sort of like this piece... not much else to say. Love Epitomized http://www.eliteskills.com/z/102125 Written from thought/emotions/experiences... the rhyming scheme is rather weird so is the structure. Not consistant at all, but I'm working on breaking free from that shell-- I think I'm doing an okay job. Enjoy. Imprisoned Inside http://www.eliteskills.com/z/102486 So short; not my style... I tried so hard to make it longer but sadly, it felt complete. Emotions and thoughts, but that's what all poems are composed of. A New Kind of Distance http://www.eliteskills.com/z/110814 not too bad, not too great, but really, not what I wanted it to be. Enjoy.