http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Raven_TheWolf The writings and poetry of Raven_TheWolf. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 12:41:04 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 12:41:04 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/134283 Oh so Emo, but accurate as to what I'm feeling right now. It's nowhere near my best, but it's satisfactory. Honest opinions, please. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/147444 Written not too long ago; early June, possibly? I'm kind of iffy on the third stanza. I think it kind of works, but could be cleaned up a bit. I think the poem itself is self explainitory. All coming from a fifteen year old. BUUURRRN! http://www.eliteskills.com/z/127668 It kind of falls apart at the end, but this is for school and my teacher's a schmuck, so it doesn't matter. It's about wanting to go somewhere, in this case, Italy, but being a mere teenager and unable to go. *sniffle* Just so you know, Lacuna Coil is an Italian Metal band that I adore. Yeah, most of it sucks, and I changed the rhyme in the third stanza, but my teacher's a schmuck and won't like it no matter what I do. So, I made it funny. Funny works better at getting a better grade with Mr. Schmuck. AND I know Crypta Napoletana is closed to the public, due to restoration. Still, it's a crypt and it should be open someday. I want to go see the tombs of famous Italian people. Sue me. AND, and, I know that not all of Italy s history is sublime... I've just always wanted to use it in a poem, and I saw my opportunity. I took it. Ooh. What now? Also, for refrence, I'm currently failing Algebra, hence the 'and try to pass my math' line. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154474 I need to get back to playing here. I've been pretty busy with health issues recently, but I'm hoping to make a permanent return to this lovely website soon. Moving on, I think that the end kind of leaves it on an awkward note, since the rhyme scheme disspears. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/127286 I've created this little beauty, ad of December 1st, 2006. I apologise if it makes little sense, but I couldn't bring myself to make any changes to it. About: Death, and the process of dying. Not your life flashing before your eyes, the nanosecond between then and death. Picture Credit to: daisy7 at deviantart.com http://www.eliteskills.com/z/99638 This has to be the first poem I've written that I actually am satisfied with. In fact, I'm very pleased with how this one turned out. It's a lovely change from the gobblygook I've been creating lately. Enjoy, please. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/122644 This was kind of forced; I had to write it for school. The theme was/is "What love is not." Yeah, pretty crappy. I'm not very good with love-y poems to begin with. Meh. Bash it, Praise it, whatever. Just hope I don't fail english this week. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/99789 The love of a pet is the best love of all. They care unconditionally, give them a moment of your time and they love you eternally. All that they ask for in return is food, shelter and love back. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/127425 This is an old story of mine. I wrote it last year or so... Re-posting it because I want feedback, duh. My first, and only to date, horror story! Based off of characters created by the one and only Alice Cooper. ('Gail' and 'Steven.' For more info on the characters, look up the songs' respective lyrics) Also: I don't own Hannibal Lector. I am merely a fan of Thomas Harris and his fantastic characters.