http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Sacred Sindy The writings and poetry of Sacred Sindy. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 12:43:37 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 12:43:37 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/162318 i am writing again http://www.eliteskills.com/z/132899 in someone's laughter i find that the very gladness of Heaven strikes upon me. i can see His glory in your happiness. please help with format/grammar/punctuation. any ideas or suggestions accepted please. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/166729 <meh> >.< please refer to the post that is written under my poem from 'ever'. i like that much better than mine. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/90509 i wrote this about a neighbor who used to come over for afternoon coffee with my grandmother. she was a mesmerizing creature. i love the way that she wore life on her skin. you could see it on her- in her age, in her sighs and in her steps. there was something about her that i wanted to eternalize. i tried to do that through this piece. my purpose was to capture her in the eternity of my words. i wrote this in 1998 and have just recently found it again. the woman i am writing about died in 2003... help me in grammar, editing, and punctuation. ideas, feedback, opinions... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/90643 NOT ONE OF MY BEST! i am actually not happy with this... but i wrote it about someone extremely dear to me and i must always honor them. anything... opinions, comments, corrections http://www.eliteskills.com/z/90645 anything... opinions, comments, corrections http://www.eliteskills.com/z/91108 This is a vision that I had one morning while studying Colossians 2:13-15. I did not write it to be poetic or to simply make a work of art. I believe it was a vision from God to sink the meaning and the purpose of the cross into my understanding. Below is just a record of what happend in my vision. I think that I need to share it. If your bold enough, I invite you to comment on it. Artwork: Christ of St John of the Cross, Salvador Dali (1904-1989), 1951 oil on canvas http://www.eliteskills.com/z/94592 mon·soon 1. A wind system that influences large climatic regions and reverses direction seasonally. 2.a. A wind from the southwest or south that brings heavy rainfall to southern Asia in the summer. b. The rain that accompanies this wind. in this poem i compare my lover to the monsoons. that is why it is under the love category. tell me what ya think please. grammar, punctuation, comments and critique. Art work done by: Ellen Wagener "Monsoon", 2004 pastel on paper http://www.eliteskills.com/z/99945 I have worked hard to polish this but am not sure if it is still ready to be called a final piece. though alot of the errors in the poem are dilberate if you see anything that still needs to be corrected please point it out. any help or advice now will do for me! slightly tweaked by chell's recommendation. thanks!