http://www.eliteskills.com/u/Swanne The writings and poetry of Swanne. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:16:28 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:16:28 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/105782 all Thanks goes out to Hyperglo and Donn for helping my fix up the last stanza... Glad you guys could help me... Swanne http://www.eliteskills.com/z/95730 Enjoy :) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/97338 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/89907 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/95144 This is deeply personal to me… I debated a long time before posting it up… As this is so close to me…I know I am blinded by its many many many faults… So give me your guidance…make this perfect in your eyes Like it is perfect in my heart please be as critical as you can ( do u think love is the right category for this... i wasn't sure where to put it) love, Swanne thanx already to Jodans...for ur help :) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/109094 I'm not really happy with the ending... maybe i should just drop it. suggestions are more then welcome http://www.eliteskills.com/z/94722 most of the credit do to this revision belongs to inspritit999... so to him I give my thanks... if not for his indepth comments... i probably would never have caught those little parts that need tweaking...for you develop a blind spot when you stare at a work to long... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/95832 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/90099 Eh..it was a quirky idea that came to me.. hope you enjoy