http://www.eliteskills.com/u/corruptedspirit The writings and poetry of corruptedspirit. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 21:19:51 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 21:19:51 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/170559 I just felt I had to write, and this is the result. I don't really know where it came from as this kind of writing isn't what I do. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/133541 This piece is far from finished, i need to add one or stanzas plus tweak the existing ones. I want to end it with a moral message, but can't find the words that i need in my head at the minute. All suggestions are greatly received.... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/170568 I myself, can only really create poems when I have been done a major wrong or I am going through some epic event. And I don't why that is, I guess it's my only way to cope. Either that or the curse is real. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/86122 With a little help from DeepDreamer, i think i got somewhere with this piece, however any more input would be great. Thanks DeepDreamer.... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/83274 Ok i deleted all my pieces from the site and intend to re-write each one. This particular piece was one of my favourites and quite a few of you liked it the first time round, so i've added afew little tweaks and hopefully improved the write. Any comments on improvement or wording would be greatly recieved....Plus any other comments you wish to post.... =o) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/83280 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/86952 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/83365 Thanks to Inspirit, for pointing out a few inconsistant lines, i think i may have finally finished this piece lol.Cheers Inspirit =o) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/83450 Yeah, it's another i'm confused and all fucked up poem. You've had good warning so no comments saying this genre of poetry has been overdone, because frankly i don't care, it helps me cope and some people like to read.... Don't like this genre of poetry... Don't read it then... To all else, i know this poem isn't a great work of art, it may not even class as average, but be honest......