http://www.eliteskills.com/u/lili The writings and poetry of lili. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 00:58:41 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 00:58:41 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/117902 well i was not feeling like the last one i did was finished or showing the emotion that i wanted it to so with some help from magnolia steel i redid the whole thing let me know what you think and which one you like best. i belive that i hit the nail on the head with what i wanted to say with this one. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/142000 i have not writen in a long time and am trying to get back into the swing of things. honest opinions welcomed. i want there to be more imagry in this piece. there is a person in my life right now that just hearing his voice or getting a little email from him just makes me feel safe. he doesnt want to change me and cares for me as i am. i cant put the feelings in to words for some reason. any help is welcome if you have suggestions for any of the stanzas send them my way. i really want to creat something for him to let him know how much he has helped me through the tough days. thought the trials and tribulations of life. he helped me see that i was doing the right thing when i was uncertain. helped pull me though my divorce. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/117705 any healp would be appretiated. doesnt seem finished.