Elite Skills Writing Club: lovedeathsdeath http://www.eliteskills.com/u/lovedeathsdeath The writings and poetry of lovedeathsdeath. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:44:27 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:44:27 -0600 Elite Generator The Wind Can Chase Itself(Complete) http://www.eliteskills.com/z/156174 I think I'm done with it now. Tell me what you think about it. Like everything else, its not set in stone so I'm open to suggestions. When Atlas Fell http://www.eliteskills.com/z/155413 Darkness of Dawn http://www.eliteskills.com/z/155521 Maybe this will help... This is a poem written to the sun by someone who felt that the only sweet thing in life was the sun, but decided that even that was not sweet enough... Comment please. I need to know what people think. That is kinda the point of this site. Unknown and Unregarded http://www.eliteskills.com/z/155258 I heard on the news about people finding newborn babies left in garbage cans and in stores. That prompted me to write this. Desire the End http://www.eliteskills.com/z/157955 I've been workding on this in my head for a while now, and I've had a sudden jolt of imagination to write it down on paper. For now I will copy Zao's song title Desire the End, but it will be changed sometime. More to come... Leaving to Return http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154633 In this poem "Darling" has a twofold meaning. It mainly referrs to My Love- my focus in life. But then its second meaning is also referring to whoever I will share the rest of my life with. That is why "love" is not capitalized. But when I say sing with me of "Love," or any other time it is capitalized, I meant the Love of God because God is Love. The poem also shows my progression of focus from where I was to where I am now. There are other things too, but I thought I'd make that clear. Absalom http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154866 Ok, well some people have told me what they thought and its what I was guessing. The poem is too obscure or the story not well known enough to understand. The story is about when Absalom took the kingdom away from his father David. It is from the point of view of David. "Her" is the kingdom. The story begins at Absalom's uprise and ends at David's lament for Absalom's death. I hope to see what people think now that its explained. April or May? http://www.eliteskills.com/z/171665 This is rather experimental for me. Meaning is found in more words than what are read... Dear Ms. Banana http://www.eliteskills.com/z/154685 I wrote this on the fly when my friend asked me what was so wonderful about a banana.