http://www.eliteskills.com/u/rouge wave The writings and poetry of rouge wave. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 07:12:10 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 07:12:10 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/117746 suggestions http://www.eliteskills.com/z/117276 I wanted to work on some poems I was going to submit to an Ezine but I will most definitely miss the deadline to submit this month. This should be a good thing because all of my poems are as they were first birthed so some touching up is needed. This isn't the poem I wanted to work on first but I'm not at home (internet is down - Adelphia) but I had some thoughts with it too. I actually changed it just now after pulling it from another site that I blog on. Please let me know what you think and let each stanza be a fresh brush stroke in your mind. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/118737 for my little brother and sister suggestions on format/over all impression http://www.eliteskills.com/z/119161 Mortality. I am still August. I really did want to be a butterfly when I was younger. Average lifespan of a butterfly is normally two weeks. I'm grateful I never changed. I spent a lot of time on this one. I know it is a lot of reading but I will appreciate anyone who does.