http://www.eliteskills.com/u/shmuzzelle The writings and poetry of shmuzzelle. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:22:06 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:22:06 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/40977 What are you looking for in terms of feedback? Any background information behind the piece? Hints? Is this just to vent? Emotional state while writing? http://www.eliteskills.com/z/40976 I wrote this piece for a project in my media class at school. It was intended to be a song, but then I realized that it's kind of hard to sing. It's kind of about my life, in a way. How I'm mad at this person who's supposed to be my friend. Someone who I just can't be real with. How I can't be real with anyone. I know a lot of people who have basically tried to run away from their problems with drugs and stuff, and I tried that for a while. I was smart and figured out it doesn't work. Cutting doesn't work either, it just makes you hurt more in the end. Then there was this friend that I was really counting on. He had pulled me back from the edge once, and I'll never be able to thank him enough for that. Nobody really seemed to care that stuff wasn't right and for a while it just didn't seem worth it anymore. I asked that friend for help, and you know what he did? He walked away. He always wondered after that why stuff was weird between. I guess we've just grown apart because I haven't talked to him in months. The end of it was really when I told him that I needed people in my life that I can depend, and that if he can't do it to just walk away. Maybe I pushed him away, I don't know. I was just wondering whether someone can relate to how I was feeling/am still feeling. Mr. Poirier (the teacher of that class) never realized that the song was about me. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/41814 Nobody needs to remind me that cutting is not the way to go. Been there, done that. I don't really know what to say about this one though. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/43152 There's not much I can say about this, other then that it was a pretty bad day when I wrote this. I was thinking a lot about what the point is, you know? It was partially inspired by "In The End" by Linkin Park. And I was thinking a lot about my grandpa. He was sick for a couple of years before he ........ Miss you, 06/09/97. "Life is something you do while you wait to die" - the Trump http://www.eliteskills.com/z/48594 I took the commetns that I received for the original and too them into consideration for the revision. Anyone have any ideas on where I went wrong this time??? And to set the matter straight for anyone in the future who reads this, the person is not me. I simply used an artistic voice. Just thought I'd let ya'll know that. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/41811 I don't even know why I wrote this. I'm not a religious person by far. The last time I was in a church was during our religions class trip in spring 2004 when we went to the mosque and a Hindu temple. I remember at the mosque, the one who was talking to us, told us that Alqueida shouldn't be using God as their reason for doing it, or something like that. I think it was that God would never ask them to do something like that. I don't know, but this is what I got. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/43290 I will admit it, I am a cheater. I've cheated before, and hope that I never will. It just feels so horrible. I've never been cheated on (as far as I know) and I just want to say that I regret that I've been the cheater. This came from someone I kow being cheated on, the only difference is that she doesn't believe us when we tell her. The only thing left to do is let her fall flat on her @$$ http://www.eliteskills.com/z/45434 I don't really know where this came from. It just appeared. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/46923 I don't know about this one. I was just sitting here, and it came out. It's probably really not good, but I wanted to preserve it anyway. P.S. I have changed it a bit from the orginal version. Basically, deleated a line, and added the spaces. I can't tell whether the spaces affect the flow.