http://www.eliteskills.com/u/spoken The writings and poetry of spoken. en-us Sun, 22 Nov 2009 07:30:37 -0600 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 07:30:37 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/45085 What are you looking for in terms of feedback? Any background information behind the piece? Hints? Is this just to vent? Emotional state while writing? http://www.eliteskills.com/z/49148 I had to play around with this one until i realized that i liked it better the way it was before i edited- and re-edited, another resubmit after takign it to the drawing board a couple of times. This may be a better lyric....you tell me. Also a little help on the title would be appreciated. Endulge http://www.eliteskills.com/z/85200 This is part two of a series part one is "Her smile gave way to laughter." http://www.eliteskills.com/z/46406 I don't fully remember what this is I just found it in an old suitcase tucked away in my closet in a notebook that also contained a fragment of an old short story. I'm posting it just to see what kinda feed back it gets I don't even know how to catigorize this. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/44565 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/44486 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/44715 http://www.eliteskills.com/z/44913 UNFISNISHED WORK OF ART http://www.eliteskills.com/z/45084