http://www.eliteskills.com/u/wordsofmind The writings and poetry of wordsofmind. en-us Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:54:29 -0600 Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:54:29 -0600 Elite Generator http://www.eliteskills.com/z/15136 It was formerly a song called "bond of preciousness", but decided to delete the chorus and leave the verses. it was dedicated to my former boyfriend who meant a great deal to me, except we didn't make it through and it ended in scenes and tears, and well we became strangers. I wish it wouldn't have ended that way and that we could have been good friends, but eh, whatever happened happened for a reason, right? And if you wish to know, the chorus went like this: We're unstoppable We're unbreakable We stand firm (lol rather short http://www.eliteskills.com/z/38307 I'm actually quite proud of this song. I didn't want it to be the ordinary verse 1, chorus, verse 2, chorus, bridge, chorus song. Every verse or whatever you may call it (excluding the chorus) sounds different from the other when sang, but they all seem to connect so well together. What do you think of it? http://www.eliteskills.com/z/15916 My good friend, Persephone, and I were fooling around and creating short poems or songs that rhyme and that make no sense. The person who's turn it is to write has a subject picked by another person and has a very limited time (or at least that's how it seemed for us). I only typed up three here, but I had more. They're not original, I know. I know that it's not what I usually would write, as well, but I want to make people laugh (if that's even funny). So there. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/163760 Do not just look. See. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/14208 The first: I fell in love instantly with spring time, and I fantasized many nights breaking away from my home and being outside for as long as my heart gets sated. It's sad that it's not very durative. The second: What a true friend would do. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/35859 The four-stanza letter: Open your angel arms To the stranger in Paradise And tell him that he need be A stranger no more Full credit to the song Stranger in Paradise. I can proudly say I relate to it so well in this situation of mine. Is it possible to correct my punctuation errors (if there are any)? 'Cause I think there may be some. And if I have any structure or grammatical errors, that would be wonderful to know. Thank you very much. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/14113 The first: I had a fight with my mom, and it inspired me to write this. We fought, we cried, we forgave, but words can't be taken back, now can they? The second: I feel like this when I see someone who I am very fond of, but of course this is overstated by imagination. The third: People are blind to pain these days by others, and I too feel invisible and neglected at times when I'm in pain. Also people look at you, but they don't really see what's happening within. Did that make sense? http://www.eliteskills.com/z/14019 The actual name is "Your smile that captivates my heart" but it didn't seem to fit in the title box *pouts*. I was fond (possibly still am, but not certain of that as of I haven't talked to him in yorks) of this boy, and whenever he'd smile at me I'd feel all, you know, everything I wrote in this prose. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/13998 Here a woman writes a love letter to her beau, describing him in four elements and asking him when he shall back, and pointing out what she lacks without him being near. This was randomly thought up several months ago.