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User	nipole | 2006-11-24 |
Subject	the title is below
Message	Paradoxical Perfections Hope stays strong when the life that died is breathing. Dreams come true when the deranged mind denies it. Benevolent are the people in the world of prosperity. Blind are the people who claim to see with total clarity. Deaf are the dead kids who get up to fight each other blunt are the swords that are used to shoot each other. What can be made of this circus tent of life? Ask anyone, nobody knows the meaning of death or life. tell me if its ok?

User	orpheus | 2005-12-14 |
Subject	an old one
Message	empty is phil i’m a contradiction in terms, like water that burns hot ice, i’m doing life in a prison full of girls i’m the reject you wanted, but the gold you throw away a wise man you’re dispising because i don’t know what to say i’m the hip hop Charlie Chaplin, when i’m rappin no-one laughs a supreme athlete running the track alone but comes last my hands are always dirty so you know i that i’m clean, caught in the act, hand in the bag,’hey m’aam it was’nt me the only sane brain in the clinic, the original generic a renagade that behaves as i’m the mimic authethic i am the infinite poet with a definite end with my intricate notice i am simplicities friend i’m excess deprivation, created desicration yin yang, child man, joined in seperation hot cold, yes no, wordless conversation stop go, high low, peacefull altacation i’m a contusion without the bruizin, a continuous conclusion contraversal confusion that always points out the solution i’m the neon cameleon so you can see my camoflage so i sabotage my espionage to give myself a massage because i’m painfully euphoric, angelically demonic a sadistic masochist so cataclismic with harmonics im a morphine amphetamine compound thats renound as a hyroglyphic cryptic clue that can’t be found i am as powerfull as Achillies but enemies aim at my heel so my open book is a blank page, as i reveal i conceal indiscreetly incognito as we go to my square circle i’m hard soft, head tails, internally external i’m excess deprivation, created desicration yin yang, child man, joined in seperation hot cold, yes no, wordless conversation stop go, high low, peacefull altication i’m duality without the dual, a bonfire with out the fuel the healthy cigarette, i’m Eclipsed, without the moon i’m a deadly medly of martial arts like Bruce Lee but i just ee-gouged my self again, ow, i can’t see i’m the illusion that’s real, i move by sitting still dexterity in calamity means i’m empty but phil insubstantial in my force i’m the loudest silent scream inconsequential with a cause, i’m up front subliminally i was born by caecarian an aries pices cusparian meat eating vegetarian, an inhumane humanatarian i am the incarnate oxymoron always lying in truth hold on..what you’ve just read, is not me it’s you... you’re excess deprivation, created desicration yin yang, woman man, joined in seperation hot cold, yes no, wordless conversation stop go, high low, peacefull altication

User	Rastine Aristat | 2005-11-20 |
Subject	untitled
Message	(since it’s only five lines long so I used opposites<kind of> in the last line)(by the way, I already know that it sucks) Night steals away the youthful dawn, Light never to see the glorious setting sun. Never a chance to see the beauty of autumn, When winter storms overrun the buds of spring. And the first celebration of life is a requiem

User	Writer Chic | 2005-09-20 |
Subject	untitled
Message	hoping for truth giving up on lies waiting for you leaving myself knowing dishonesty forgeting trust how was that? sucked huh? oh well!!.

User	Avril54 | 2005-09-19 |
Subject	: P
Message	I hate ice cream It tastes so sweet I luv that smell Smells like feet And feet stink wow, that sucks. oh, well, I tried! P.S. I don’t hate ice cream! ~Cruella DeVille~

User	Inducted_Kitty | 2005-08-29 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Side by side yet far apart Far from mind but close to heart. Love you still but hate you more Still interesting but yet a bore. I once had respect Now I know you’re a whore.

User	LameMansTerms | 2005-05-20 |
Subject	untitled
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User	besodemuerte | 2005-05-15 |
Subject	untitled
Message	she thinks of the one she loves, hating herself seeing him in her dreams, waking to a bitter reality her eyes open, closing off her desires but even in darkness light shines down and the stars remind her he’s thinking of her i have no idea... i just wanted to see if i was getting the jyst of it...

User	SouthrnQT | 2005-05-10 |
Subject	The Circle
Message	Splicing through time, the sharp knifes blade Begrudging us of happiness, dulling our existence Secretly wishful upon death’s wake Announcing it’s life through a newborn cry.

User	jermwerm | 2005-04-14 |
Subject	just a lil try
Message	I’ll show you a poem thats veiled to all, speaking of secrets without speaking at all. I will throw you these words as my hand holds them tight, bringing dimmed peace that leaves with our light. you may ask me why bother? I’m told I am dead. you will silense with poster, screaming I’ve lived. these words were so fast, as it slowers our thoughts. this will freeze in the desert, it will burn in the frost.

User	marysunshine | 2004-12-27 |
Subject	untitled
Message	I adore frequent rarities... and stolen gifts like yucky chocolate... and hunger like a feast.

User	Indigo Kid | 2004-12-22 |
Subject	foot fetish
Message	The man was ugly The girl was sweet She hated her shoes He loved her feet He smelled the odor with utter content She saw what he did and felt complaisent Bound in the store, alone in her chair She wanted the freedom of new shoes , only one pair He told her to leave due to the look on her face She stayed in her spot and that began the chase This is the story of a girl who wanted shoes and a man who loved feet... who do you choose? Silly, I know... blame Sex In The City... Indigo

User	jaycee | 2004-11-11 |
Subject	untitled
Message	When I moved the challenge from my messages, I misunderstood the original challenge here, so pretty much there is no wrong way to do this. The original challenge (antonyms placed adjacently in the same line) is the hardest to do. Any variation is fine: opposites adjacent in the same line Opposites non- adjacent in the same line. Adjacent lines with opposite meanings. Nightmare Date and both of Friendly Felines posts are good examples of the original challenge. jaycee

User	dmm | 2004-11-01 |
Subject	Opposites game
Message	My cursive is hard to read So I print with lessened speed Differentiating ’u’s and ’v’s The same with my ’l’s and ’t’s When I finish I feel so pleased To start learning my A B C’s

User	eener | 2004-10-22 |
Subject	Here's my go....
Message	Although you are young, old is the way That some stupid intellectuals want things to stay. The dark light they use to see society Makes yesterday’s fake truth take propriety, As their blind eyes succeed failure when Their attentive ignorance conquers once again

User	sinjen | 2004-05-13 |
Subject	untitled
Message	lovers without emotion a fish out of the ocean vanity in a holy man a violin plays with a hard rock band a scilent scream a truthfull lie red is to black day into night

User	Crash | 2004-05-02 |
Subject	Cool
Message	This is cool angela~.... a bit different than the in,out... up,down... juvenile opposites.... great work, I will check out more of your work as my limited, infinite time allows lol

User	angela~ | 2004-04-29 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Okay...I shall try this. I was dreaming realities that cannot be possible when awakend gently, roughened hands on my cheek My weakness strengthend by your loving touch as you lighten darkening thoughts. Sun rising, settling my nerves. In your kisses I am lost, found to a new passion As lust burns hotly, cooling my inhibition your mine forever, never will I stop loving you

User	jaycee | 2004-04-26 |
Subject	untitled
Message	You guys have done a great job. This was originally a challenge to me from Crash and I misunderstood his meaning. The opposite words side by side in a line is very difficult until you get the hang of it. But feel free to write using opposites in alternating lines too or even within a line. All three ways make for some interesting writes. jan

User	magnicat | 2004-04-26 |
Subject	untitled
Message	lost was found in one second of forever then he fell so low he had to look up to look down kinda stupid, by i tried!