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 User  Brack-Attax 
 Topic  thoughts? 
 Message  I’ve noticed that you can analogize thoughts with many other things.
I’d like to see if you can.

ex: Thoughts are like" unwanted guests."
Or even" life emerging"

Try it.  

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 User   Tae-Anna | 2005-12-30 |
 Subject  Random Thoughts 
 Message  The elements are all powerful,
We need them, yet their destruction is immense,
Feel it,
Tsunamis, Hurricanes, etc.
Does it really end? 

 User   KimmyMim | 2005-12-23 |
 Subject  Right Frontal... 
 Message  Years slept in the stream of time.
But seasons are old...
and sundown restores time,
like doubt between old sheets. 

 User   detatched | 2005-06-17 |
 Subject  Thoughts 
 Message  The subjective calm
And sanctity of lies.
Fufill the final breath,
For life is just a sigh. 

 User   ruejacobs | 2005-06-13 |
 Subject  poppyseed mind 
 Message  these apothcaric jars have gone broken in the sun
and forgotten lay in regiment on rusting metal shelves
spice, poison, opiate, perfume
each one had a use.
and now the labels have all faded
an alchemist’s delight
what potential compositions lie in wait
here mercury could turn to gold 

 User   Rokhal | 2005-06-09 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Like fractals:
a blizzard, an onslaught of scurls and jags
unless we drift
---float far enough---
when we will see it all
in sudden
frightening
order. 

 User   Brack-Attax | 2005-06-01 |
 Subject  water 
 Message  like the floaties children use
to learn to swim.
if they weren’t there
we would drown 

 User   WolfStar | 2005-05-31 |
 Subject  a thought 
 Message  a phoenix in the golden glory of sunlight
gone before the memory sinks in
or even before it can be recognized
sweeping here and there
a little flash in the corner of faulted vision
until it’s too late
and it has already reduced to ashes
remnants of what it had been just before:
alluring and elusive, swift to fly
on free wings to its death.  

 User   Brack-Attax | 2005-05-30 |
 Subject  cool 
 Message  like carbination in soda
always popping up
once gone, so is the life 

 User   insipid sky | 2005-05-30 |
 Subject  Thoughts 
 Message  Like children;
Constantly in motion, active even while sleeping.

Like blood;
Beneath the surface, but it can be seen,
and thoughts can be heard, when expressed aloud.

 

 User   ThatWasOnceMe | 2005-05-30 |
 Subject  Thoughts 
 Message  LIke butterflies fluttering

Drifting in and out of sight

Like the sun peeking out from the clouds

Moments are bright then dull again 

 User   ThatWasOnceMe | 2005-05-30 |
 Subject  Thoughts 
 Message   

 User   vedanta19 | 2005-05-30 |
 Subject  Thoughts 
 Message  like waves..low and high.

like a broken pieces of mirror, scattered.

like sunrise of a new day, promising.

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