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 User  ruejacobs 
 Topic  new poetry challenge 
 Message  take someone else’s words from an editorial, or forum post and set it to poetic form. credit the person who allowed you to use thier words.
here’s an example


these words are not mine.
i just loved the way his thread looked in the myspace forum. i asked him if i could post it here, and he said yes.
here’s his URL: http://www.myspace.com/daveolif

Dave’s Lament by Dave

so yeah i am

like been seeing
(this girl and)
weve been cool
and then
like I find out
she sleep with my
uncles
dogs
vets
sons
neighbour
(and shes)
is
pregnant

(but mite)
actually be (m I n e) and

n

o

w
(she wont give me head)

and she has
cheated before (but not)
sure if i
shuld ( t r u st h e r )
but i
cheat too
so
like maybe that
evens it out
and then
o
m
g
z
there is this other
grrl who mite


like me but
(i dont like her)

but i think
maybe i might
like her but
i am c o n f u s e d

because she lives
a long
way
away

and im not sure
(about ldrs)
but then
shes a different race
and wat yall think
about interacial relationship
?
and then
this
other
girl who i was sleepin
wit said
i wasnt treatin her right
and that she wants me
to
have sex with her

more but
she is fat
and i dont want


to but
she says if i dont shell ( leave me )

and go
f**k my friend

(but my)

friend is a girl
and then
theyd
be
lesbians

but they are different race
and
o
m
g
z

(interracial relationship)

and what yall think bout

lesbaisn and i

feel so bad
coz (my parents said)
i shouldnt date


this girl

coz
she
a
ho

but

(i really like her but)

my friend
f**ked her but


i wanna do anal
but she wont

let me and she
(has f a k e b o o b s)

and i (don)t know (if)



i like fake boobz



what should i do
?




 

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