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 User  Black Rock Tractor 
 Topic  BRT's Rough Posts 
 Message  This is my place. Not yours. I’m not looking for comments. Just read and leave. Or just leave. Whichever. 

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 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2008-03-13 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  splay my balls like cantelope
suck the juice like nectar
pluck my eyeballs like olives on a toothpick
rip out my intestine through my anus
and stuff it with politicians 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-06-01 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  the ginger snaps lick my balls
suck me suck me
lollipop walls
the penis rises, later it falls
but not before
it peeks through the door
of a lucky lucky
doll

slip slurp, get me off
rip your skirt
if you must
the drip drop on your bust
looks like icing

oh yeah oh yeah
right there right there
that’s it
don’t stop
OK now
bite me
punch me in the face
oh god that feels good 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-04-25 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Born to the tit of Athena
All there was to see
Was seen before weening

Now these lips are dry and cracked
suckling the buttons
on a remote control

The eyes that guide them
weep with no tears
for the world they see

And the world, it weeps
with tears of acid and ashes
for the heart it lost in blindness

 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-04-21 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  the poetry trapped inside
has escaped and run away
so that apart
the parts
could proliferate
 

 User   nameless_nobody | 2005-04-19 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  *runs in while BRT is out, chnges all the locks boards up the windows and sits in the middle of this place mumbling about quaters rights* 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-29 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  This may seem an odd statement of love,
but let me say anyway, and please read with open mind,
that in the times we spend apart
I meet many women.

Do not let this rub you the wrong way,
it is nicer than it sounds, and I must tell you the truth;
whether their breasts be big or small
their size is never quite right.

These lines, I know, they stumble along,
drunk with glee that you see them. I am a bumbling fool, too,
when your beautiful eyes see mine,
and I drink of your soul.

I love you.

 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-25 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Love is the filler of the void of the lonely,
assuaging the emptiness so often mentioned
in poems like this that bound on the pointless.

But my love has been poured from the pitcher of happinesss
by the distance between us and my hapless intuition,
forsaking the life that I pictured us living
in each others arms, forever. 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-20 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  life is a poem
but this is not life
it’s only an attempt
to understand loss
as the measure of love

what can be said is
that more than we need love
we need not to lose it
but often we do and
there’s nothing more brutal
than wishing it hadn’t
gone away

and the end
is always
too sudden 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-18 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  make me your whited sepulchre
your fleshy vice
devour my penis in the trench of your thighs
grant me no fantasies, or escapes from reality
make them unnecessary, fuck me, claw me
pulverize my desire to a dust of exhaustion
with your buttocks, your breasts and the palms of your hands
kneading away
the frailties of manhood
with the touch of a woman
 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-16 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  An old, wooden bench that once belonged to Bernard Baruch
holds magazines covered with the faces of rich people.
My mom tells me how she bought it from the church
after it tore down the former home of Camden’s greatest citizen
to build a new dining hall.
Nevermind that the town is mostly covered with trees
and ubiquitous brick buildings of no particular provenance.
It’s funny how most of the furniture was bought by church members,
and the building contract was given to a deacon.
The least these fat bastards could have done
was to build a gym for their own children,
but I guess the past isn’t the only thing that they don’t
give a rat’s ass about.
 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-15 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  love turns into jazz music
spinning bee-bop steps and endless solos
in a dimly lit bar
where even the band is an audience
and everyone empathizes
with the syncopated highs and lows
each note leading a blind song
through a haze of smoke
and brass whispers 

 User   Learah | 2005-03-15 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Hmmm... I thought you didn’t read much?
Doesn’t really sound like my cup of tea. I’m SO not an intellectual reader. I just want a good story, heavy prose kills me stone dead... 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-14 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  No, it’s not obscure, but it’s on almost every page of the C-H Brewitt Taylor translation of Romance of the Three Kingdoms. So are words like "obeisance" and "vanguard". I’n not saying they don’t exist in current usage, just that the books I read growing up used them a whole heap more than the latest John Grisham novel or Hemmingway classic.

"Romance of the Three Kingdoms" is, by the way, an extremely taxing book to read, and only for the diehard multi-cultural enthusiast. 

 User   Learah | 2005-03-14 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Um, I don’t think "asunder" is particularly obscure. I just think that NC isn’t very well-read. 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-14 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Yeah, I came into using that word because it was so widely used by the victorian translators of chinese literature. That’s where I’ve gotten a lot of less common words. I’ve read them so much that they feel natural. They’re good words. 

 User   Learah | 2005-03-14 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  LOL "asunder" is a word!

"a·sun·der ( P ) Pronunciation Key (-sndr)
adv.
Into separate parts or pieces: broken asunder.
Apart from each other either in position or in direction: The curtains had been drawn asunder. "

In future, check dodgy words in a dictionary before you attack people. 

 User   _NC_cloud | 2005-03-13 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  asunder 

 User   Learah | 2005-03-13 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Um.. what words did he make up? 

 User   _NC_cloud | 2005-03-13 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  how do i have no idea, about what dumb ass? what do you have any sort of powers over this forum? you are dumb. use actual words and dont make them up. and mabye you wouldent have to deal with me if you put these in youre journal. 

 User   Black Rock Tractor | 2005-03-13 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  This _NC_cloud person has no idea, does he? 

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