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 User  ManiacalSkeptic 
 Topic  "Someone" 
 Message  Is it wrong that when I die
I want to be in someone’s life
I need someone to cry for me
When my spirit’s finally free

I’ve never cared for all that much
Someone’s words or soothing touch
Though I fear not where I’ll go
I do not wish to walk alone

And in my peaceful time of death
Something someone should regret
I hope to hear a loved one’s cries
And see the tears in someone’s eyes.


I wan’t somebody’s memories
To be my immortality
For what’s the use in living on
If no one cares when I am gone


I wrote that when I was little.. I don’t like it all that much.. But it was a start..

Signed: Aier Rose

~DREAM SPARROW~
 

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 User   ladydeathstrike | 2005-04-17 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  what do you mean you dont like it? its great i mean i love it! its exactly like my poem but with much more detail next to yours mine seems very amatureish  

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