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 User  Kitten17 
 Topic  Krystys Poem&intro. 
 Message  Hello I dont know much to put here how about a poem? It’s ummm Pretty recent I suppose.
(Cutter)

In a slash,
you’ve made up your mind.
To slash that knife,
one more time.

The feeling is ceren. that dies out.
When you see yourself bleed.
You think you have relief,
but when you truely see.

Your feelings were incomplete.
Snap!
Just like a dream.
You forget everything.

That took place that momment.
It’s only good as a prop.
Like a good way to stop.
Everything from falling apart.



(To be finshed later)
(Feel free to post credics&etc. I do take pride in my poetry I have a writers block right now on this one I have been working with for months. I know my stanza’s should be 5 lines but right now I am just working on finishing. However I am open for help please. It’s really good and I am working really hard on it. It’s good now but it could be great. :) ) ~Krysty 

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 User   Kitten17 | 2005-04-12 |
 Subject  : ) 
 Message  Awww thanks. : ) seriously I thought it was me I got depressed and havent been on a few days. 

 User   besodemuerte | 2005-04-08 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  some people just dont like to make comments in the forum..  

 User   Kitten17 | 2005-04-07 |
 Subject  Krysty 
 Message  I didnt ask for spelling tips..........However ummm thanks? 

 User   Kristina9178 | 2005-04-07 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  ceren=serene
truely=truly
momment=moment

 

 User   Kitten17 | 2005-04-04 |
 Subject  hmmm.. 
 Message  That bad? 

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