| User | Pippa Cavalli | | Topic | untitled | | Message | A soft, wordless murmur trickles down the back of my neck. The most incredible warmth surrounds my body, fracturing the bitter cold that bites at the heels of the windows. The surface beneath me shifts and I sink deeper into the most intoxicating scent, allowing it to seep into my every pore. I rest my fears against a broad chest, my thoughts tucked safely away beneath a strong jaw. A protective arm pulls me in further; I am no longer a single entity. I exist now as a part of one soul, knitting itself together as we linger in a peaceful slumber. This room, our sanctuary, shutting us inside our own private nation, keeping out the mere idea of any other world beyond the cherry panel door. The only reminder of our ties to the other place is a clock whose red numbers I refuse to look at, for if I do, this all may have well have been a dream. But then a possessive, lingering kiss finds its way to the hollow of my neck, sending warm shivers throughout my body. I turn in his embrace and find myself falling into eyes that mirror the summer storm we are so longing for. Words become futile barriers that weave a tight net between two souls, and with a strange sense of excitement, we let them slip away from us, our breathing the only sound cradled by the beautiful silence. Any one else would say that they could become lost in eyes like his, but not I. In his eyes, I find exactly what I am looking for. A love beyond the greatest comprehension of the word, a trust far greater than that between a man and his god, a devotion deeper than any idea of time, and an understanding that words could never express. They are like the rain, dripping emotion over my body, soaking my heart in the most intense feeling of love and happiness I could ever desire to find. His lips brush mine in a profound understanding; I am not the only one caught up in the emotion of this space. And as we reluctantly pull away and I burry myself once more in the safety of his arms, I realize that this is the man I would die for, this is what it feels like to be so deeply in love that your life no longer matters unless it is with theirs. I am in love, and there is no place else I would like to fall. |
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| User | Winterbliss | 2005-05-04 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | You should have these on your page,people will read them more.Look on the right hand side of your screen and you’ll see submit,click on that and write you poem in the box.Then submit and it will show up on your page for others to read.
Good write by the way. |
| User | pestiferous | 2005-05-03 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | you’re not going to get comments for your writes in forum...submit them...
this place is more or less for questions and answers...etc... |
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