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User	Hecate | 2008-09-06 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Feet ungrounded Lost and floating I find the world seems to have lost its color I watch life through a movie screen Can’t feel what I have seen my fingers grasp air These days it feels like another resides inside Using me to be alive

User	WhatYouWill | 2008-06-20 |
Subject	Changed Poem
Message	I suddenly notice my feet are ungrounded, I look, and the empty spaces are where I find myself, floating, loose, but not free The world around me is empty, Color, taste, sound, have all disappeared I am watching the life behind my back with a mirror, watching the future on a movie screen Around me are all the things I can see, Only one of them I can touch I... no longer feel like myself My reactions are gone, my emotions devoured I can feel someone else residing inside of me Using my heart to be alive Now, here is something new What is this, this thing that I feel? Color is back, but sight has vanished, and all of these alien sensations seem to be reality

User	Blue Monk | 2007-11-05 |
Subject	easy fit
Message	Imbedded middle of the day restless, restless failure to focus child of predestiny bird in a cage eyes casting pensive or apprehensive perception or reality who might know if spirits can fly

User	KrazyAhi90 | 2007-10-16 |
Subject	ending
Message	who is this person, i do not know so out of place, a wonderer this feeling of lonliness, i can nought but tell longing for my rightful place in this world A place i call my home.

User	KrazyAhi90 | 2007-10-16 |
Subject	ending
Message	who is this person, i do not know so out of place, a wonderer this feeling of lonliness, i can nought but tell no one can tell that i’m troubled longing for my rightful place in this world A place i call my home.

User	sir james | 2007-03-28 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Then suddenly a blinding light that change in course it seemed so right I’ve passed beyond my night eclipse. My lungs they fill, my heart it ticks. This newborn sun how warm it is. My skin again feels like my own, and aliens flee to dark unknown.

User	1949mercury | 2007-01-27 |
Subject	squeel
Message	what could this be... apig a... cockateil my god my lord ive lost my mind i beagan a poem and i need it to rhyme but whats the knocking on the space ship window??? it could be the alien ill have to make him go il huff and ill puff and ill end this poem but hell it all rhymed that sure friggen showed em

User	1949mercury | 2007-01-27 |
Subject	squeel
Message	what could this be... api a... cockateil my god my lord ive lost my mind i beagan a poem and i need it to rhyme but whats the knocking on the space ship window??? it could be the alien ill have to make him go il huff and ill puff and ill end this poem but hell it all rhymed that sure friggen showed em

User	Jazzy | 2006-06-08 |
Subject	no clue
Message	Piercing, withering gaze, Received from that poor child, Is this not sufficed? Glances I sent back to him, O’er his nonchalant haze, Docile outwardly I seem, Strolling down the beach, With the plausible hope, That your disappointed eyes, Might vanish with my dreams

User	Music4Me | 2006-05-18 |
Subject	It is done!
Message	I twist and turn No hope in sight The darkness has come To devour the light This muted life That I now live A flicker of a promise That I wanted to give Feet ungrounded Lost in space I float away Without a trace Alien sensations seem so real Unknown sensations That I feel It is just a war I fight A war within A war for light And now it is a battle lost They have come They have claimed Taking my soul away with them

User	John Ratliff | 2006-03-26 |
Subject	Finishing
Message	You can feel it kick and I know and lament I’m pregnant again, Goddamnit!

User	1949mercury | 2006-02-28 |
Subject	1949mercury
Message	if i were to finish this poem i couldnt be real (just ending it so it stuck with the rhythmatic flow)

User	Rokhal | 2006-02-21 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Touch right through the floor Like a raindrop-skin, I slide out from a raindrop skin And drop in the cold, dry wind. I had never felt my hair blow, Nor my toes and fingers whistle, But now my skin is bare, And something knows to laugh As the ground puckers below.

User	anaxor | 2006-02-15 |
Subject	Yay
Message	And all the birds will fall from the sky and everyone will wonder why and all of them will disppear and we’ll all wonder why we were left here

User	Sethesin | 2006-02-15 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Get rid of it

User	clovernfoxglove | 2006-02-01 |
Subject	untitled
Message	...And stil the camera reel will roll and stars will shine and the world won’t know the screams that never reach an ear my haunting cries that no one hears reach in the void take my hand these emotions are something I don’t understand. I cling to every breath every second every sight in this colorless void I am the light....

User	Rokhal | 2006-01-23 |
Subject	untitled
Message	Toes void, In the void my hair floats wide as kelp. In this black void there is no kelp, But a black clicking of little metal toes, Metal reeling dried old celluloid across a silver screen. See the screen. My face is silver like my silver hair, A silver spider spinning in my ear Whose whirring toes wind all the void in kelp.