| User | stars mystify |
| Topic | RaNdOm |
| Message | Life-
Now, so many sleepless nights Awaken, by sorrow and fright Fearing for what lies ahead As I lay upon my restless bed Feeling my heart ache with pain Trying so hard not to go insane Wishing these thoughts would dissapear As I try desperatly to hide the tears No one can save me from this fall I know that soon I’ll lose it all All the memories tossed aside All the hopes and dreams have died Nothing seems to matter anymore After all, isn’t that what life is for? It’s meant to be a hurtful place Where everyone can make mistakes But no one tries to mend the bleeding cut So it appears we’re stuck deep inside a rut This world it filled with lies and hate Where no one really knows their fate We go on living like it’s all alright Even though we can see no shining light I know that no matter how loud I scream My life will soon be nothing but a dream. Red- Like passion growing in your eyes Like fire glowing in the sky Like anger hiding behind deceat and lies Feels just like a warm embrace Just like the rosiness on your cheeks and face Just like love lost without a trace Smells just like a blazing fire Filled with lust and a burning desire Seems emotions are going ever higher. The End- All these years have passed I should’ve known they’d never last Promises and lies Broken and kept I guess I’ve been living in a dream That is now being ripped at the seams My world of make-believe is falling apart Now I’m being placed back at start So many twists and turns Will I ever learn? A good thing never lasts It always end up being a thing of the past Memories and thoughts slipping away As I go on throgh these days This time there’s no way out The good is being out-weighed by the doubt I’ll hold onto these last few breaths Until I decide to accept my imminent death |
|| Replies ||
| User | Nickygirl | 2007-09-10 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | The beginning’s very impressive, but towards the end, the deep emotions start to abate. |
| User | maja124moxie | 2007-07-06 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | The emotions are there, it’s a good poem, but it’s not deep enough for a suicide poem. |
| User | yamifox | 2007-03-23 | |
| Subject | ....... |
| Message | hehehe suicide.... i like it its good.... even though i see alot of these... but its goood, to me, anyway..... |
| User | Azuire | 2007-03-17 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | another suicide poem? bleh. |
| User | BusterLILblock | 2007-03-11 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | yawn |