| User | dublhelix | | Topic | feedback | | Message | can i get some feedbak on a poem i wrote? noone has commented yet.
thnx. x
http://www.eliteskills.com/z/44866
thats the addy. its the first poem i ever wrote.
thnx dudes |
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| User | vedanta19 | 2005-04-08 | | | Subject | title please! | | Message | read your poem.i cannot give comment as you have been inactive for 3 days/something like that. I think for a start, you should start giving titles to your poems.How would you feel, if you were called ’untitled’?! ;)
Secondly, loved the thought behind the poem. It would be better if you can work on the grammatical mistakes and puntuations. :) |
| User | ladyngold | 2005-04-02 | | | Subject | Feedback | | Message | I am new, only two wks...went to your page and read ...critiques... and you have a colorfully explosive personality at such a young age (do smile)...oh well the point of this message... which poem is your first ...I will be happy to read it. I am not formally trained to write or review poetry so keep that in mind so your expectations won’t be shatter smile ~always love Cheryl~ |
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