| Message | Hey all,
I just got around to getting to working on some stuff that i got in the comments on my writing.
The most common thing I got was that my pieces were intimidating to read because most of them were just paragraphs/big blocks of text. So i took the advice and broke them up into prose to make it an easier read.
If some of you could go back and read and leave some feedback, it’d be appreciated.
Thanks. |
