| User | ruejacobs | | Topic | Ban the cyberbully! | | Message | This guy on Eliteskills is leaving hurtful and insulting comments on peoples’ poems...his name is Eli whitneyradio. has anyone else noticed how unpleasant and cruel this guy is? is there a way he can be banned form Eliteskills? he really doesn’t offer one constructive thing to this site as far as i can tell. here is a list of his last few comments:
1. This poem is an absolute turd. If you’re actually fooling any girls into thinking this is good they are complete morons. I’m only occasionally this blunt.
-eli whitneyradio
2. If the white owl you are talking about is the English Language, you’re doing a hell of a job. That species will be extinct before I clock in on Monday morning.
- eli whitneyradio
3. This is really just a cliché work. Please don’t get yourself excited about it even if most of the people on this website say it’s good. It’s not good writing.
- eli whitneyradio
4. You really did a good job of remembering whatever it is you were blabbing on about via terrible spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. Now I’m going to take care of something you forgot...
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There. That should be enough to get you started
- eli whitneyradio
5. Hopefully these lyrics are never put to music. I can’t even imagine hearing this coming out of a speaker.
- eli whitneyradio
6. You really need to brush up on basic spelling and grammar if you’re going to submit works to a literary site. I can’t look beyond those simple errors and see the rest of the work. It makes you look pretty bad.
- eli whitneyradio
7. This poem lacks imagery as well as strong word usage. It’s really boring to read. You need to really examine and think about the words you’re using.
-eli whitneyradio
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| User | Sheakhan | 2008-04-06 | | | Subject | word to your mother. | | Message | most of those comments are, in fact, constructive.
harsh, true.
but constructive.
if he’s really truly this terribly harsh on the poems he comments on, i suppose I would be inclined to believe that the poems he reads are shit.
if a poem has nothing to offer the reader, then the reader likely has a lot less to offer the writer as crit.
just a thought. |
| User | Cirruculum | 2007-10-11 | | | Subject | I Agree with Screams | | Message | I don’t consider that cyber-bullying whatsoever. I really like the fact that he is speaking his mind.
When you submit something to a literary site, you people need to realize that anyone has the right to critize you however they wise. If you don’t like what this person is saying, simply ignore it. If it gets to you that much, IGNORE him permantely. I do believe that you can do that on here, no? |
| User | screams | 2007-10-10 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | dude, this guy sounds pretty cool. That is way better than most of the comments comming through this site. I will go check him out. |
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