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 User  dismentled 
 Topic  Dreams 
 Message  Not wet dreams, or the type of dream where you’re making out with someone only to wake up to your dog licking you. No, the type of dream you attempt to achieve in life. Everything that you ever want/wanted to be and or have. How much is it worth? What are you willing to give, to sacrifice to reach it? And in the end, would it be worth it? All that you gave up, did, and didn’t do? Is it really worth all that much just to try? Would the ends justify the means, and would the sacrifce be worth the potential reward? 

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 User   dismentled | 2006-05-30 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  I want to be an an aritst and writer too. I also have a band and know a producer. However my drummer’s busy in another band at the moment so we never get to practice. It’s not that i don’t belive we can’t do it, on the contrary I believe we can. But am I supposed to spend all this time on a possibility and not get my life in to order as my son sits hundreds of miles away not knowing where or even who is father is anymore? Am I supposed to take away that from him on a possibility? 

 User   supergirl_in_oh | 2006-05-30 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  we have a band and we have songs we just need a drummer and someway to get noticed 

 User   Toxic_Rayne | 2006-05-29 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Yeah, make a band with my sister, be an artist, and a writer, and a CSI. That’s my life dream. Maybe I expect too much out of myself....

*tox* 

 User   supergirl_in_oh | 2006-05-29 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  my dream is what alot of tennage rockers have is to be a rockstar i am willing to give up anything exept family because as much i say i hate them i can’t live without them. but our band is pretty close 

 User   dismentled | 2006-05-29 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  what do you mean you see them through DJ? I don’t understand that part? also, not to dismiss you beliefs, but what about the possibility of not achieving your dream, (whatever it may be), what happens than? 

 User   DrkRomeo_sGirl | 2006-05-29 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  i have one particular dream and this might sound so superficial but its true but i see all my dreams through DJ. I gave up softball, cheerleading, friends (who obviously wasnt too much of my friend), family members (who didnt back me up), and my list could go on. Yes i "know" my dreams wiill come true. NOt unless im in a freak accident which knowing my luck that could very well happen, but anyways thats my comment. My reward i m reaching toward is worth much more than what i gave up. 

 User   dismentled | 2006-05-29 |
 Subject  Hell 
 Message  just for starters!

I see my dreams
Fall further away
and watch my invisions
fade from me
a future foreseen
now shackled & chained
ripped from inside
tossed to lake

what must, what must,
it-feel-like
to have all
your dreams come true?
do you know,
do you know
what it feels like,
to have them ripped from you!?

I break down
for the first time,
I break down
for the last time;
smiles and frowns
in/out my mind;
frowns stay,
smile weren’t mine

do you know,
do you know,
what it feels like
to have your dreams ripped from you!?
what must, what must,
it-feel-like
to have all,
your dreams come true?

Are
you happy now?
I’ve given
Everything!
half heart
half soul
peace of mind
left long ago
no time for me
but still I wait
gave up more
than you think;
goodbye life!
goodbye dreams!
too much
been ripped
From...me
 

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