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 User  xaos 
 Topic  Amen for Love.. 
 Message  
She kissed my tender harp
Dusk dews myst I taste it’s spice
Holy cloth rims thru her abyss
I grip Cupid-nector’s naked reach

Lady arch your wish above gloom
Splashes from a cancered yawn
I do hear a verbal bliss echo cracks
Shall drown in leaks of angle myths

Equipt dawn and ruby lead
Please shaed me autumn’s helm
Dose more of your bitter youth
I’ll then fall into fantasty

Love spice but little salt
Love sweet thought not sour
Do I cause you to quench? 

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 User   timberwolf720 | 2004-12-12 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Love....bah. humbug 

 User   mae | 2004-12-09 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  Yeah, you know I can sit down and just plunk any old bunch of words on a piece of paper, too. As a matter of fact, a chimpanzee can pull words out of a basket and stick them to a piece of paper. It would make as much sense as this mish-mash does. It looks like you just shook a dictionary over your keyboard and wrote the words where they lay. This is bad, just plain bad. 

 User    | 2004-12-06 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  run a spell check for god’s sake 

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