| User | Dragonslayer |
| Topic | asking for comment |
| Message | I have an ongoing story, which doesn’t have a title yet. I really don’t want to name it yet until I’m sure I know where it’s going. Please, if you have the time, could some of the people here comment on it? The last time I posted a story on here, I could had two comment’s on it. I know separted the story up, and only post two pages of it at a time. Thank’s |
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| User | Dragonslayer | 2005-03-06 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | i know, ive read countless times that people are lazy, and to break up the story into parts...i did break it up, but u two have been the only ones to read it, so far. maybe i should take mister fizzle’s advice and comment on others...ill get on that! |
| User | Mister Fizzle | 2005-02-27 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | Hey Dragon,
The best way to get feedback on your writing is to give feedback on other peoples writing. The best way to do that is to comment on about 4 or 5 poems from the same person before moving on to the next poet. This usually makes the poet feel the need to come read your work as well for payback. It’s really important when your writing short stories on here because people are generaly lazy and shy away from anything longer than a couple of paragraphs unless they are on a mission. this information I betsow upon you is all from personal experience on this site. hope it helps peace, mister fizzle |