| User | Dark Romeo89 | | Topic | Willingly | | Message | Hot led brakes the air
As the smoky shell drops
Strait into the hart of life
The blood stops
Burns so much but fades away
Like the light of day
Into the abyss of
Tranquility
Willingly
No comprehension
Of the indention
No longer noticed
in my chest
Only the absence of pain
Eternity to gain
Better than any other hie
Unlike all the rest
A soul in flight
Only the best
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| User | Dark Romeo89 | 2005-03-04 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | oh
ok
sorry |
| User | mae | 2005-03-04 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | You know, dp, you have a page on which you post your creative writing pieces. The forum is not that page. This is a place to discuss writing issues, not another place to post your pieces. mae |
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