| User | Dark Romeo89 | | Topic | Anatomy of a Mind | | Message | Sailing the universe without a clue
Empty pockets
But so much is due
Like the worlds got you by the balls
Protected only by the walls
Of mind and emotion
So many words spoken
But not even a notion
Of what we all have
Deeper than physiology
Deeper than skin and bone
More than biology
The battle within a mind
a soul in ruins
Sanity not far behind
Personality
One of a kind
DNA dissected
A knot only to unwind
But nothing to find
The anatomy of a mind
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| User | Aphotic Sunrise | 2005-03-26 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | Wow... that’s some pretty trippy stuff. I like it though. Kind of a weird rhyme scheme and it has its own meter. It’s pretty cool, though. Hope you are enjoying the site...
- Virgil |
| User | yale | 2005-03-23 | | | Subject | Forum mail! -yale | | Message | I like your poem " Anatomy of a Mind" I dont know what yo did but it makes sense and it reminds me of inside a confused mind lost in a world thinking of things happening. Sorry if I freak you out, but that’s what a forum is. Right? |
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