| User | jermwerm | | Topic | true love | | Message | Sitting on the grass green plaine.
A vision came to me,
seperated clouds with strings of light,
magic waves of spells to free.
Sunshine light of sparkled glow,
golden hair and halow rings.
An angel to elate the sunrise
my heart and soul she brings.
Her eyes so blue of ocean sky,
a touch into my dreams.
She awakens sleeping love,
a fear that I can’t see.
She tells me everythings alright,
in her arms I fall asleep.
Only to awake in nightmare,
as darkness slowly creeps.
Angel of the purest evil,
disguised as heavens beams.
Left my heart and soul to die,
shaddered all my dreams.
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| User | SouthrnQT | 2005-05-10 | | | Subject | True love | | Message | Not sure what you want from this? As we are supposed to submit on the site to have our poetry critiqued. As for the subject of true love, I myself think it only happens to a chosen few, and this whole fairytale of ’There’s someone out there for everyone’ is just a farce, to give people hope. That’s my opinion of true love. |
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