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 User  PiecesOfMyHeart 
 Topic  Her 
 Message   Her-
wanting, waiting, hopeing, trying.
Busy New York heat.
Picking up her bag,
walking away, down the street.

Her-
sitting, remembering, wishing, crying.
Alone in the dark,
thinking to herself
on a hard bench in Central Park.

Her-
hurting, breaking, choking, dying.
Laying down her bed,
memories play-
laughing, mocking, taunting- in her head.

I turn.
I see.
Beautiful, ugly.
Skin-fair, pale;
Lips-lush, longing;
Eyes-empty, shallow.
I turn.
In the glass, I see her,
And she is me...  

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 User   pestiferous | 2005-05-03 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  you’re not going to get comments on your write in forum...this place is for questions and answers...etc...submit your writes in the right place for everyone to see... 

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