| User | Teamballin | | Topic | A story I created. | | Message | Here is a story I’ve been working on, its based on a true story. More parts coming your way, enjoy...
A girl from the suburbs with a white-washed persona. A cocky young flashy kid from the hood and deep into the hip hop persona. No comparison and surely no way an hell they would be seen as a good couple, judging from their past appearance of boyfriends and girlfriends in their past. Vanessa was sum piece of work. If Bryson woulda known then what he knew now heading into the relationship. He for sure would have walked away and left Vanessa alone, with the impressive playa skills and reputation he had picked along the way in life. However, glad that he did meet her, Bryson felt that every time he was in her presence he was blessed; however, He didn’t always act like he was blessed to be around her all the time, the playa in him made him appear to arrogant at times and unable to deal with.
Bryson met Vanessa during college, he had her in a couple classes, she was always fine to him but the guys Vanessa would find attractive were really not even worth her time in Bryson’s opinion judging by her looks and the way she carries herself. Vanessa was engaged when Bryson first met her. However, judging from her being so young and inexperience at what life had to offer her and the many new faces she was about to meet in college, Bryson knew the marriage wouldn’t last, let alone make it to the altar. Bryson never cared that she was engaged, he is a player anyways and had a few girls that were badder then Vanessa was that he messed with; therefore, Bryson communicated with her in class but never gave her a thought other than that, but could tell she was attracted to his swagger and charming personality. As school continued on, yet again, Bryson had Vanessa in his music class, As I look back on it, sometimes I think fate brought us together or maybe God got tired of me breaking hearts, so he wanted me to notice how it felt to get my heart broke.
Time goes by, Bryson and Vanessa begin to communicate a lot more, due to class material and text coming constantly in class. As the communication grows, so does there fond for one another; Vanessa is attracted to the charm and presence Bryson has around him, as if he is a movie star judging from the popularity and the constant rings from his cell phone from the many women that call him, the constant stories about the amazing weekends he has intrigues her innocence. Bryson is attracted to Vanessa body and how excited she looks when she is around him, making him feel important. Now Vanessa is single, well sort of anyways, Bryson is attracted to her but juggling other women in his life made it hard for him to have enough attraction to her to draw him closer to her. However, Bryson enjoyed her company, her personality was just so familiar to his; furthermore, thinking fate had something to do with this meeting. Bryson always knew she was feeling him but she also had a crush on a friend of his; Bryson being the good friend that is, passed her on to his friend. Bryson was more interested in the women he was involved with at the time and still saw Vanessa as a good friend, a really beautiful one.
My boy screws things up with her badly; it was just horrible, his friend was just inexperience and had no game, and Bryson had to wait till it was all said and done before he could think about taking a shot at Vanessa. Bryson’s feelings begin to grow stronger for Vanessa when he sees how inexperience his friend is at getting Vanessa attention. The whole time Bryson would sit back and watch his friend make a fool out of himself and wonder why he even let his friend waste her time. Vanessa would call Bryson all the time complaining about his friend not putting any effort into perusing her and Bryson would then develop sympathy and this would build up his already developing attraction for her.
Time goes by, Girls and Guys enter in their lives and leave just as quickly. Bryson and Vanessa become closer and Bryson finally begins to realize he really like Vanessa and wants to do something he hadn’t done in a very long time. The temptation was just getting to Bryson emotions. Vanessa was just saying all the right things, If it was me..., Me and You would be the best..., and a personal favorite to men I promise if you were with me I wouldn’t hurt you. Then the sex came in and was just incredible; therefore, Bryson switches his mind frame into player mode and first objective is to juice Vanessa, a normal routine of his with regular girls, get anything and everything out of her and not care about her, just keep doing your player lifestyle. Boy, did Bryson not see what this relationship had in store for him.
After a while, Vanessa was all Bryson could think about and he was all she could think about; she had to have him all to herself because when the two were together everything was so memorable and when they step on the scene on the night life, it was like P.Diddy and J.Lo was at the party, they were that hot together. So Bryson decided on January 12th to make Vanessa his girlfriend after 4 months of talking and a year of actually knowing each other. Vanessa first all is just cute; she has a great body that she continuously works on to deserve it. The prettiest eyes, for real Bryson thought her eyes is what got his attention, even when he was mad at her.
She could dress, even though she had no ass at all, she could work the hell out of a pair of jeans, like she was super model Gisele. Even though she didn’t think so, she has a gorgeous face, all the make she wears is very much unnecessary. She could walk in a room and have everyones attention. Bryson started to be intimidated by her presences, being how nervous he was around her now that everything changed for them, it was just bananas. The thing that impressed Bryson the most about Vanessa was that she wasn’t impressed easily, making it a challenge for him when it came to talking to her because he had to always stay on top of his game which was why no girl started to not be able to compare to Vanessa in his eyes. Vanessa is a alcoholic and Bryson loved to drink; perfect. When it came to sex, Vanessa could rumble with the best of them and Bryson was already a legend in the sack; however, sex is always a big plus. Bryson made funny comments about Vanessa constantly to keep him from being star stuck by her new beauty. |
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| User | WolfStar | 2005-07-15 | | | Subject | untitled | | Message | In case you plan on posting Part 756, I should tell you that this is not the area to post your work. This is usually for discussions, questions, etc. Please submit your work in the "Elite Posts" section and I’m sure we can all see you there. |
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