| User | jassal |
| Topic | comments sought |
| Message | ok everyone...especially all those who like poetry...tell me whtas wrong with my poem ’reserrection’ please.... |
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| User | NoMartyr | 2006-07-07 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | What do you mean "Too much dictionary". There was not one pretentious word. I’d expect to hear that comment for one of my poems, but definately not that one. |
| User | Logic | 2006-07-06 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | Too much dictionary |