| User | ConfuzedSingle |
| Topic | My rant |
| Message | I miss your arms around me
I miss the talks we had I wish you were here with me In the same vicinity I look for you on the street My heart skipped a beat Reminds me of you The thought of you with her I don’t cry as much as I did I reach out for you, and you’re gone. |
|| Replies ||
| User | Logic | 2006-07-06 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | That was the worst "poem" I have ever read. I’m am serious. I can’t believe that was written. WOW |
| User | rounin | 2006-03-14 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | I’d like to say that this is different from the hundreds of broken-heart poems that are out there, but it isn’t doing too well on the originality scale. Of course everyone can relate because this happens to every single person. |
| User | firefox | 2006-03-09 | |
| Subject | Great!! |
| Message | Well, I think that most will identify with your poem because almost everyone experiences these sort of emotions. Overall a good read. The flow seems good , though I guess you should pack something more dramatic in the middle part...
Thoughts? |
| User | giver_of_death | 2006-02-03 | |
| Subject | ... |
| Message | This reminds me alot of how I feel..except I’ve still got my guy but evil an evil whore keeps flirting...ya well anyway..I really like it and I can relate.Great write! |
| User | 2bheard | 2006-01-29 | |
| Subject | wow.. |
| Message | okokok, i have read the comment guide many times, and i know this is vague, but its so true: i can fully relate. i had a friend who just up and left for no reason, we never talk anymore, but our parents are like best friends, that sort of thing. its so weird, and everything reminds me of when we were little, and we were best friends. i luv this poem, its awesome. all i can say is good flow, good rhythm, and good poem. |
| User | Metauru | 2006-01-22 | |
| Subject | *Sniff* |
| Message | This... really hits close to home... *tear*
Much props... |
| User | +LifeLine+ | 2006-01-11 | |
| Subject | nice |
| Message | I like this alot because it’s alot like how i write. Good work. |