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 User  avy 
 Topic  one to never 
 Message  one to smile
one to cry
one to take their own life.
never is a promise
so do as you say
keep your word, it’ll pay.
one to weep
one to scream
one to let go, clenching a dream.
another to look past the lies
claiming "everything’s fine"
the one to witness a breakdown inside
and find a suprise
in the most innocent of lives.
so glad that you came by
because never would have ended my life.

tell me what you think
 

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 User   Logic | 2006-07-06 |
 Subject  untitled 
 Message  One who doesn’t like this poem. 

 User   WritingPrincess | 2006-02-10 |
 Subject  one to never 
 Message  Hey i think this is pretty good. I’m sorry you haven’t gotten more posts. It says something that only those that understand can see. I can see you’re good and strong. Keep at it. 

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