| User | tZar |
| Topic | Words on love |
| Message | Just went around the place to look for a new writer. A thing I have noticed is how people use certain words and phrases. It is not how the individual writer uses them, but that a large part of some love stricken group uses the same. I think we should have a lost love category which censured words and phrases like:
Cold night Dark night Cold winter Chilling The cold finger of winter Death of night Clouds and suns in the same line Etc. Etc. Or how about a love category which censured words and phrases like: Soul mate Blossom Blooming garden Eyes and seas Cheeks and apples Your lips are like something Sunlit something Rose Soul have touched me Your gentle touch Deeply touched (hmm, how far south is that?) Etc. Etc. Then as a supplement to these categories, we might add that when people say that they want to write on one of the subjects, the write only on that which they choose. By that I mean, that if you try to describe the loss of love, do not tell me what love is. It might be a healthy exercise for those of us: which cannot but love that watery nymph who lives in the opening of a sunlit wood Oh, fairest of spirits who have so deeply touched my soul (abracadabra) let me reach out and grab you before you turn into dust and leaves me with a smouldered heart Best, -tZar |
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| User | Logic | 2006-07-05 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | More BULLS*** from tZar
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| User | | 2006-05-10 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | Yep. Pretty cheesy lol. |