User	IamYourTragedy
Topic	A post
Message	I didn’t feel like posting this on my page. But I’ll let it lie here. There’s a chorus you sing As you walk along the street (Whispered so quietly) I could barely hear your song But it was there Echoing like some absurdity A sharp chord in a jail cell It reverberated through my spine Breaking my ribcage And now all I know Is I want more

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User Logic | 2006-07-11 |
Subject untitled
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User IamYourTragedy | 2006-07-10 |
Subject ~!~
Message Yeah, I’m a big fan of parenthesis. I love to use them to soften statements, make them quieter, almost like unsaid thoughts, or maybe to clarify something. Area ll the pomes on your page ones from you wrote awhile ago?

User | 2006-07-09 |
Subject hmm
Message why didnt you feel like posting it on your page.
it does stray a little from you usual style, it has a different feel somehow, but you have this one thing, the bracketthing, you always do it. a signature piece perhaps?
at the moment, ive got this folder, of all these poems i wrote over the last few years, and i am re-writting them and slowly posting them.