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 User  BeautifulSoul 
 Topic  Short Story 
 Message  I have written a short story for my College English 11 Lit Class and would appreciate it if someone would comment on it. I have only had one comment so far, by Ron Cole (a very generous commenter), and would like a few more. It would be greatly appreciated. Thanks. It’s called "The Lottery; the Black Dot."

P.S. Read the description before you read it. 

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 User   qwicksilfer | 2008-06-21 |
 Subject  reviewed it :-) 
 Message  I wrote some thoughts down :-) 

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