| User | wordsofmind |
| Topic | unattainable dream |
| Message | The dismal tears spread through her cheeks
Creating toxic runoffs that, if touched, do kill Anything, slowly and painfully They fall from the verge so rapidly And into the end called ground Creating a river of infinite abyss And in the end of infinity lies a dream Of fate bringing two lost souls And forging them as one Yet, it is nothing but a mere dream And two lost souls will not be forged And dismal tears will cry A river of infinite abyss With an unattainable dream xxxxx reasonable criticism, suggestions, and praise are all welcome :). Fresh poem, written few days ago. |
|| Replies ||
| User | Mister Fizzle | 2004-07-15 | |
| Subject | untitled |
| Message | damn wordsofmind,
how did you get so f-ing cool. this poem is rocks to me. fav. stanza The dismal tears spread through her cheeks Creating toxic runoffs that, if touched, do kill Anything, slowly and painfully holy molly I love that. |