| Message | I am new to this site and i thought i would post my newest peom. So far i have gotten good reviews from my friends on this one. Its kind of deep for me, but i write what i feel to get it off my chest.
I have entered my poems on a site, Mypoetry.com and they have contests. I have gotten pretty far but my mom is a little sceptical on the whole thing. the last thing they sent me was to put it on an "exclusive Track" of thirty three special poems recited, and i have two pages dedicated to me and my poem. but its not the peom i am about to submit. Here it goes. ^^
Implicated Reasoning.
Eyes stare at me as I walk,
Shadows lurk as I pass.
The light becoming smaller,
I wonder if I can last.
Dreaming of nothingness,
Wondering if I’ll wake up.
At times I think I am alive,
Until I stare into my tea cup
And find out I am in a dream.
How I wish I would find
A certain peace within,
Someone who can be so kind
To take my hand and guide me
Through this jungle I’ve perceived
As a world entangled in untold lies,
Oh how this world is conceived.
Voices yell at me as I stare,
And hands reach out to abuse
My already fragile soul.
Since I am alone, there is no one to accuse-
My death is mine own.
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