| User | Maki | | Topic | Darkened Prayers | | Message | I haven’t had any conments ecxept for good and keep it up. Is there anything wrong? can there be rearanges or anything? Help is appreciated.
Darkened Prayers
Afraid to close my eyes
To see another day
When its all the same despise
What year or month comes my way
Powerful thoughts cross my mind
Of death and mutilation
I always wish I could rewind
And go back to dawn of creation.
Scary nightmare comes too soon
For I haven’t’ had the chance
To sit in the waters of life and prune
All I feel at once is a giant lance
Into my fragile side
And now my soul free at last
Can no longer be relied
On for its travels very fast.
Day to day I feel this pain
Night to night I feel relief
All my hopes have now been slain
There’s no such thing as belief
Afraid to close my eyes
To see another morning
The day to day lies
Have gotten me mourning
For too often do I do this
Lay in happiness at night
Day to day unbalanced kiss
Leave me out of the living light.
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| User | Raksha | 2004-09-16 | | | Subject | Darkened Prayers | | Message | Well you maybe could add in the to this line...And go back to the dawn of creation. and to>Scary nightmares come too soon, but really those would be just picky things to me...but who knows... |
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