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User	darkwitchgoddes
Topic	dead little girl
Message	there was once a happy little girl in me but soon she faded away all the times you laughed at me still haunt me every day i hope you know it’s all your fault that little girl is dead that little girl who once was me is now inside my head i can’t help watch her twitch from all thoughs words you said her mingled little body is now all cut and dead but every once in a while i see her move a bit but than your words start up again and she falls down in her pit her pit is filled with spikes that cut her up each day but still it feels better than your words come day by day...

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User xaos | 2004-12-05 |
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Message lol, I thought this was good. This line was the best..

"They say that im crazy, because of what I do...
But they dont know what im going through.

The pain, torment and torture i suffer..
I pop one pill...then another... and another...

I fade away to a far away place...
I wish i could see the look on her face...

"Hey, I hope your happy now?
You ruined my life, you stupid cow!"

User Raineyes | 2004-11-18 |
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Message I can totally relate to this. . .My little girls dead to but I killed b/c she cried to much. . .see my poem Red Painted House. . .

User angela~ | 2004-10-03 |
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Message Thoughs words you said? HUH? Do you mean THOSE?

User Aksuri | 2004-09-24 |
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Message refer to "read and learn". Then read and learn. Teen angst poetry...